Post by Timmy564 » Sun Jun 23, 2013 11:55 pm

The website is not fully updated yet, still updating the products and pricing.
www.livosa.com

What do you think? Any criticisms?

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Post by butte » Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:53 am

Logo is an imaginative take on the bland essential font, works very well. V-e-r-y slow loading, be back in a few minutes. Okay, back. "You are here: [breadcrumbs]" is effective. Relegation of color to products made large enough to see is effective in categories, but the initial population of categories' product thumbnails would be 2x to 3x bigger before being effective, as to color, as to seeing details, and as to reinforcing the basic idea of selling and buying solid (or in futons' instances bulky) rather than inflatable furniture. (I'm still waiting for some worn out soul to come up with an inflatable futon, the uninflatable ones, being even worse than King matresses, make as much sense as putting a laid down refrigerator or a tireless car in the room.) I would switch dead whites (one screen, plural contributions among screen elements) to neutrals visibly removed from dead white. You can generally ask yourself but must beware whose answer you are believing whilst playing with white before anyone else sees it, "Is this white trite?" Overall, nicely done.

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Post by Timmy564 » Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:56 am

That was a little too educated for me this time in the morning apart from the last 2 word, thank you. :)

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Post by butte » Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:10 am

Okay, above after awake, here before awake. Logo good. Color left to products good. Navigation aids good. Thumbnails too small (don't "say" selling solid furniture). Consider switching white background to neutral grey, can be fairly dark or fairly light. Sum, nicely done.

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